"No more light! He'll find us!"
(Hey all, hope you're doing well. So I've recently been kind of inspired by the success I've been seeing with the Two Sentence Stories. As such, my wife recommended I try an even MORE difficult writing exercise: Six Word Stories. Let me know what you think.)
Concise (and evocative) writing is often much more difficult. You are rocking this format.
ReplyDeleteWho is he? Could the boogeyman be out on a spree?
ReplyDeleteIt's not a rock concert - put out the light!
ReplyDeleteGood job!!! Six words is even more challenging than two sentences.
ReplyDeleteBut darkness scares me cause it screams the truth.....
ReplyDeleteOoooooooooooooh, they get spookier and spookier! Really good! I think I will switch the lights off now! Valerie
ReplyDeleteGood one. I like it. :) I was always, and forever will be, in awe of Hemingway's six-word story.
ReplyDeleteExcellent! Perfect wordage.
ReplyDeleteCreepy line and creepy hands in that pic.
ReplyDeleteIt's challenging to write a story in six words! You did well.
ReplyDeleteHi Robert - six word stories ... I might be able to do that! But this one I love ...
ReplyDeleteLight's out, the damage well hidden ...
Thanks for visiting me and your comment on my mind! It aims to entertain ... cheers Hilary
A six-word story sounds challenging to pull off, for sure. This one's great! :)
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