Saturday, October 3, 2015

Writing Inspiration - Spooky-Tober Version - 10.03.15




"Please don't go out tonight." she begged as I
finished snapping my harness. "I saw something
moving down there." That was a moment before
the boat lurched and I was thrown overboard,
falling into the black abyss.

11 comments:

  1. oh, dear, falling into a black abyss would be my worst nightmare!

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  2. The lochness monster is lurking down there

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  3. Oh dear. Wondering about the abyss though. Space ship? Marine versions don't seem high enough. Though terror enlarges everything...

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  4. Well, that doesn't sound very promising, does it? No one likes a black abyss! I have faith though. He has a harness and that must connect him to something. Maybe he'll get pulled back from the brink of disaster. Thanks for stopping by my blog! :)

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  5. That must be an opening line. This story could go so many directions from here!

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  6. Ooh...that says so much. I want to know what happens next!

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  7. That is scary. What's at the end of the abyss? A good line to attract attention.
    Thanks for stopping by my blogs.

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  8. That could be a very scary scenario!

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  9. Scary, I think he is done for! The abyss suggests the unknown..like death, the afterlife. Brilliant.

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