Sunday, October 8, 2017

Little Island Tales - Part 3


    "Diego!" Tamah yelled, waving at him from the far end of the village center.
    While a few of the older men and boys were stacking large, carefully-cut logs on the Pyre, the ever-burning fire, a number of the younger boys and girls including Ka'lani, her sister Tamah, and her brother Fetu were all sitting in a small group with a few of the older women; namely Samaria, Ka'lani's mother, was there along with La'ei and Natia.
    Diego, carefully slipping by one of the older men as he hefted an armful of logs towards the Pyre, joined the crafting circle.
    "Hi Diego!" Tamah said with a smile and another wave.
    "Hi Tamah!" he said back, trying but failing to match her girlish enthusiasm.
    Tamah was two years Ka'lani's junior, only eleven, but she'd always been very sweet, especially to Diego. She constantly said hi and wanted to do things with him. The regular gestures had even been enough for Fetu and Ka'lani to tease her about it once or twice, but that hadn't stopped her so far and Diego always felt obliged to at least humor her a little bit.
    "Sit next to me!" she predictably encouraged him and patted an open patch of sand with her free hand; her other hand deftly clutching a piece of charcoal.
    Diego looked at the spot and then considered.
    Each adult was helping to lead the children in making different things. La'ei and Natia were both instructing the children in charcoal idols. La'ei was helping them make the avatars while Natia was directing them in the creation of name markers. Samaria, like Diego's mother, was making smudge sticks by carefully tying together a number of dried herbs. Diego knew a few of the herbs, including the white sage, garlic, carob, rue, rosemary, and asafoetida, but there were a few there he'd yet to learn the names of despite his best efforts.
    That last one was the worst though, and he gagged just looking at the asafoetida.
    It just stunk so badly when they burnt it.
    All the herbs and coal would be burned, of course. The smudge sticks, stinky asafoetida and all, would be offered up to the Pyre at the height of the ceremony, as would the charcoal. According to the elders, the smudge sticks and their incense would help to ward off the shadows. The charcoal avatars cut into the shape of the aka-akua, on the other hand, would burn away the power of those things in the dark so that they had no strength until the next moonless night. Finally, the name markers, carved to remember those that were lost, would send the dead on their way and keep them from becoming one of the demons.
    "Diego!" Tamah insisted, garnering a quick look of annoyance from Ka'lani and Fetu.
    Both of them were working on smudge sticks with their mother. It was still weird seeing the twins side by side after having spent so much time with Ka'lani alone growing up. Fetu, unlike his sister, was larger and more powerfully built and spent more time with the village men than at school. Even at his young age, you could tell he would be a warrior by his size alone. The only thing that really stood out between the twins were their eyes; they both were the same golden hue of their heritage. Both housing the same, stark intelligence.
    "Sorry, Tamah." Diego offered, pulling out the smudge stick from his belt. "I gotta work on this. Show me your coal when you're done!"
    A flash of disappointment crossed Tamah's face for just a moment, but it was quickly replaced but her normal childlike joy.
    "Okay!" she said and quickly returned to her work on her coal avatar.
    At the moment, the avatar resembled a crooked star more than anything else.
    Diego slipped through a few of the other children and sat down next to Ka'lani and Fetu. He didn't really like wrapping the smudge sticks as much as carving the charcoal and immediately felt a twang of regret for not joining Tamah, especially since he'd probably join the older boys in a year or two in helping to feed the Pyre, but he couldn't help himself. He'd rather sit next to Ka'lani.
    "I'd say your work is already done, child." Samaria said in her low, soothing tone.
    Her soft baritone, like a gently played long-horn, always betrayed the fire in her belly and Diego stumbled over his words in immediate realization of his mistake.
    "Y-yes. I mean, this one is done and all. But this is my mom's. Not mine. And I'm not sure if it has asafoetida in it so I wanted to make sure we made it right." he half-stammered in defense.
    Samaria raised a single eyebrow; a threatening gesture from someone like her.
    Ka'lani's mother, like all of her children, had the same golden eyes. Diego had always been fascinated with them growing up because, unlike the others in the village, there was something alluring and captivating about those eyes and their family was the only ones who had them. However, Diego had quickly learned that those same eyes denoted a frightening level of intelligence that the entire family shared.
    And Samaria? Samaria was easily the smartest of them all.
    It's what made her ire so scary.
    Ka'lani was quick witted and quick tempered. Fetu, much like his sister and mother, had a temper but tended to be a little more calculating and cunning. Tamah, while still smart, seemed like she was from another family entirely with her cheerful disposition and gentle nature. She was the only one whose eyes seemed more of a deep auburn than stark gold. But Samaria was like a slow burning fire. Those who didn't notice the flames would be consumed by her wrath.
    And, having a moment to think about it, Diego had probably just invited that wrath by disappointing her youngest.
    "I just want to learn more about the herbs." Diego said apologetically, changing his defense. "I already know how to make the avatars."
    Samaria's threatening eyebrow dropped just a hint.
    "And I figure it's better to know all of them...you know, if I need them or something."
    "Or something." Fetu offered not-so-helpfully.
    Diego spared a threatening glance at Fetu but the twin just smirked back, challenging him to try something more.
    Diego didn't.
    "Fine." Samaria said coolly, an underlying threat just under her breath. "Ka'lani."
    The single word was all that was necessary and Ka'lani's mother quickly returned to helping a few of the younger children.
    "You really don't know all your herbs yet?" Ka'lani said mockingly.
    "In his defense," Fetu quickly offered. "He is an idiot."
    "I'm sorry I haven't perfected underwater basket weaving." Diego snapped at Fetu.
    "Or regular basket weaving. Or weaving in general. Or using a basket. Or..." Fetu counted off on his fingers before getting hit with a smudge stick by his sister.
    "Or learning even basic defensive spells." Fetu quickly added.
    He got hit with the smudge stick again for that.
    Ka'lani sighed deeply before spreading out a selection of dried herbs in front of them.
    "I swear I've taught you this before." she said with exasperation.
    "Probably have." Fetu said.
    "Yea." Diego agreed.
    "Then why don't you remember it?"
    Diego shrugged and also got hit with the smudge stick.
    "Fine," Ka'lani said begrudgingly. "It's just important that you pay attention, ok? You need to remember this stuff. It could mean the difference between life and death."

14 comments:

  1. I'm like that with learning something too. Takes me a while to remember it all. I'm liking this so far.

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  2. Implicit tension grows. Loving this tale. Thank you.

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  3. You've constructed a wonderful atmosphere. It draws the reader in.

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    1. Honestly part of the goal with this little project. I'm trying to have a more open and inviting atmosphere...a more realistic one. My other works get the oppressive, scary feeling but it's so often focused on the raw drama that it's nothing but climbing the roller coaster.

      Trying to get it right. ;)

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  4. Hi Robert - I like the repartee between the characters as well as the notations you give us relative to each of them ... clever - cheers Hilary

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  5. Hi Robert!

    I liked reading this story...and the dialogue is good. Thank you!

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  6. Ooh, love this. The way you described their golden eyes, and the family in general, is superb. And I'm really enjoying all the back-and-forth between the characters. The "he is an idiot" part made me laugh way too much... XD

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  7. Whatever you feel like writing, please keep at it. You have a gift. And roller coasters are good, too. Hope you're feeling well and having a good day.

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  8. In his defense, he is an idiot....Ha ha. Love it.
    Have a great week, Robert.

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  9. robert; this story is taking a great turn; and ...an interesting one; wondering if diego WILL pay attention now to kalani.....this story truly holds the readers attention; great job once again ! ☺♥

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  10. You have delightful characters and I think you have captured a realistic village setting. I think Diego needs to learn his herbs. Especially the power of the smudge stick. A charcoal avatar, I don't think I am familiar with these. You have enchanted me with this story. Please keep it coming!

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  11. I have a sage smudge stick. Maybe I need to light it now!

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  12. I love smudging!!!
    This is such a magical story! Charcoal avatar? Interesting!
    I can't wait to read more!

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