Wednesday, October 14, 2015

Six Word Story - 10.14.15 - No Light




 "No more light! He'll find us!"





(Hey all, hope you're doing well. So I've recently been kind of inspired by the success I've been seeing with the Two Sentence Stories. As such, my wife recommended I try an even MORE difficult writing exercise: Six Word Stories. Let me know what you think.)
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12 comments:

  1. Elephant's ChildOctober 15, 2015 at 12:30 AM

    Concise (and evocative) writing is often much more difficult. You are rocking this format.

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  2. Pat HattOctober 15, 2015 at 6:17 AM

    Who is he? Could the boogeyman be out on a spree?

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  3. Alex J. CavanaughOctober 15, 2015 at 6:21 AM

    It's not a rock concert - put out the light!

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  4. Stephanie FarisOctober 15, 2015 at 8:04 AM

    Good job!!! Six words is even more challenging than two sentences.

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  5. DEZMONDOctober 15, 2015 at 9:02 AM

    But darkness scares me cause it screams the truth.....

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  6. Valerie-JaelOctober 15, 2015 at 9:44 AM

    Ooooooooooooooh, they get spookier and spookier! Really good! I think I will switch the lights off now! Valerie

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  7. J.H. MoncrieffOctober 15, 2015 at 10:40 AM

    Good one. I like it. :) I was always, and forever will be, in awe of Hemingway's six-word story.

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  8. Sandra CoxOctober 15, 2015 at 7:27 PM

    Excellent! Perfect wordage.

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  9. AnonymousOctober 16, 2015 at 3:06 AM

    Creepy line and creepy hands in that pic.

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  10. Sherry EllisOctober 16, 2015 at 7:56 AM

    It's challenging to write a story in six words! You did well.

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  11. Hilary Melton-ButcherOctober 16, 2015 at 8:23 AM

    Hi Robert - six word stories ... I might be able to do that! But this one I love ...

    Light's out, the damage well hidden ...

    Thanks for visiting me and your comment on my mind! It aims to entertain ... cheers Hilary

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  12. Heather R. HoldenOctober 16, 2015 at 12:18 PM

    A six-word story sounds challenging to pull off, for sure. This one's great! :)

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